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Salve! I wrote the "Viator II" page, and I see that you marked it as L -2. I was wondering if you could give me some pointers for improving it. I'm always trying to learn more about this beautiful language! Thanks! <font face="Courier New">--[[Usor:Secundus Zephyrus|SECUNDUS ZEPHYRUS]]</font> 04:46, 3 Aprilis 2010 (UTC)
:Salve et tu Zephyre. Not a whole lot wrong is with your article, maybe -2 was too much. There are a few things, though:
::As has been discussed elsewhere ''spatialis'' refers to physical space, compare the English "sptatial" which has nothing to do with outer space. ''Astronavis'' I think is what was decided.
::I'm not sure what ''deducta'' is doing here.
::I don't find any examples of cosmos in the plural used like that (I could be wrong).
::What is a golden disc of travelers? (this might be my ignorance of the Voyager program).
:Best regards,
:--[[Usor:Ioscius|Ioscius]] <sup>'''[[Disputatio Usoris:Ioscius|∞]]'''</sup> 11:53, 4 Aprilis 2010 (UTC)
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