Disputatio:Ecclesia sancti Francisci de Paula in Catona

Rex Momo requested my comments. Not much to say so far, but:

1. Why have you used templum throughout? It is true that that word is sometimes used for "church," but it is a bit odd that you never use ecclesia except in the title (and furthermore as a wikilink ecclesia makes more sense than templum)
2. Rather than "Erat hic iam" I would recommend "Iam aderat" or "Iam exstabat".

--Iustinus (disputatio) 15:09, 10 Octobris 2012 (UTC)

Vide Disputatio:Ulrica? IacobusAmor (disputatio) 16:30, 10 Octobris 2012 (UTC)