Disputatio:Helder Pessoa Câmara

Chiedo scusa, le ultime modifiche le ho fatte io, senza connettermi !!!

Desculpas por las ultimas correciones. No estava conectado !!!

Rex Momo 17:09, 28 Augusti 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Rex, you don't seem to understand what an encyclopedia article typically does. The first sentence ordinarily emphasizes the person's "claim to fame," the person's main achievement. You've now changed this sentence to "Helder Pessoa Câmara (Lusitanice: Hélder Pessoa Câmara) (1909–1999) natus est Fortalaetiae in Brasilia die 7 Februarii 1909." On the contrary, the most notable thing this man did was not merely to be born. And you've hidden amid boring verbiage the facts that he was a famous theologian and archbishop. IacobusAmor 20:43, 28 Augusti 2008 (UTC)[reply]